Sunday, September 11, 2011

"Adapted From A Childhood Story-Red Riding Hood"

"You sure about this? If I really do this, I want to get at least some of it," Jacob explained.

"Fine! We`ll split the the money 50-50. Don`t worry about it. Once you do this, I`m sure you`re going to get more than what you expect. Trust me. Just do as I say. Bring the girl back to the warehouse and meet me there. Everything has been planned well. But whatever you do, DON`T kill anyone," Rick replied.

Jacob pulled out his gun as he hung up the phone. He put on his mask and slammed the door open....

Ryder was the only child from her really wealthy family. Her parents, Pete and Jenna, were always busy with their company`s business and Ryder barely gets to see them. Hence, she lives and spends most of her time at her grandmother`s house since young. She had always thought that her life was never complete even though she had everything she could ever asked for. She always misses her parents and wished that her parents live together with her and her grandmother. People always mistook her for being such a fake person. This was due to the typical human mentality thinking that rich people are seldom kind, sincere and humble. Well, Ryder was the kindest person anyone could have ever met. Furthermore, she was also one of the hottest girl in school which made people envy her.

There was also one thing about Ryder that only she knows. She had this gift where she could see visions about anything bad that was likely going to happen in the future. She never really told anyone about this as she doesn`t want to be called a freak.

One day Ryder was on her way out from school and got a call from her uncle telling her something had happened to her grandmother.

"Okay thanks Uncle Rick. I`ll be right there as soon as possible," Ryder was anxious and worried when she heard the news. She rushed through the hall way and accidentally knocked hard onto Jessie. Jessie was one of the notorious girls in school. She was one of those girls you see in movies where there will be this one girl who is the head cheerleader and dates the hottest guy in school and always being backed up and followed around by a couple of bimbos. Yes, Jessie was exactly like that.

"Watch where you`re going you freaking orphan! What the heck are you rushing for? Your parents just came back from their business trip to see you but end up disappointing you just because they have to again right before you`re home? Well, life`s full of disappointment! For you though, not me," Jessie roared. Expecting people to know Ryder`s not so perfect life.

Ryder just kept quiet as she had other important things to attend. She quickly gathered her things that had dropped all over the floor and got up. Before she even got a chance to take a step forward, Jessie pulled her hair and pushed her hard to the ground. She wondered why she hadn`t seen this coming from the "gift" that she possesses.

"Where do you think you`re going orphan!? I`m not done with you!" Jessie shouted, still unsatisfied. Ryder was cornered and it attracted some crowd. Nobody helped but instead the students took out their phone to record a "cat-fight" showdown. There wasn`t even a kind soul to help break it off.

Jessie picked Ryder up by the collar and pushed her hard to the wall where she hit her head first. She heard a really thunderous voice coming from the other end of the hallway asking the students to disperse. She blacked out.

She woke up and realised that she was in the hospital. She looked at the clock and it was almost 11pm. She came back to her senses and jumped out of the bed. "GRANDMA!" she thought. The nurses tried to stop her but failed. She headed as fast as she could to her grandmother`s house.

As soon as she reached, she went straight to her grandmother`s room and gave a heavy sigh of relief. Her grandmother was sleeping soundly on her bed. However, she felt something wasn`t right though.The lights were all switched off and the house was in extreme darkness when she got in. The television was still switched on and the kettle just whistled. She went to her grandmother`s favourite rocking chair and found out that it was still warm, as if someone had sat on it for quite a really long time and had just got up. She went back to her grandmother`s room and realised that her grandmother covered herself fully under the blanket and facing the opened window. Her grandmother appeared bigger too. This really made her thought that something was definitely wrong because her grandmother would always close and lock her bedroom windows without fail every night before she sleeps.

The kettle whistled even louder now and she rushed to the kitchen to turn the fire off. Just as soon as she turned to exit the kitchen, a quite buff masked man who was around 5"6' had his gun pointed straight at her head. She felt the cold metal against her mind went to a total blank. She couldn`t think of anything.

"Don`t retaliate. Just do as I say as you`ll be safe," the man said to her, still pointing the gun towards ger head. Ryder wondered where her grandmother was.

"Oh, your grandmother was being a bit too noisy and nagging too much. So I decided to put her to sleep and let her rest forever," he continued. Ryder`s heart sank immediately when she heard that. She just lost the person whom I really love. Who would have such a heart to kill an innocent elderly?

"This wouldn`t have happened and my grandmother would still be alive if Jessie were to just fuck out of my life," Ryder thought, being so pissed with Jessie. If it wasn`t for the commotion that Ryder and Jessie had earlier in the day, Ryder`s grandmother could actually still be alive now.

Ryder was brought into a black car which looked almost ruined as if it was just brought from the scrapyard. Ryder didn`t struggled as she just wanted to be safe. She was then brought to a very old warehouse which she had never seen in any part of the street before. Cold sweat started running down her face and body. Everything happened so fast.

She was lead to the warehouse where she had her mouth taped and then tied to a wooden chair. Another man came out from the darkness and she couldn`t believe her own eyes. She wanted to scream but the tape was held tight to her mouth. It was her own Uncle Rick.

"I never wanted to do this you but your own dad made me do this. He threw me out of the family business just because of one minor mistake I did. You know what pisses me off more? Your mother was the one who asked your dad to throw me out of the business just because she thought I would be of no use in the future. I can`t believe my own brother whom I trusted the most would do this," Rick explained in a very mallow voice. He approached Ryder to remove the tape from her mouth.

"But why did you have to get grandma involved in this and kill your own mother?!" Ryder screamed the top of her lungs. Jacob quickly taped her mouth again.

"WHAT!? YOU KILLED MY MOTHER!?! I TOLD YOU NOBODY WAS TO BE KILLED!" Rick shouted in resentment as he looked towards Jacob. Rick`s face was all red out of anger. He went straight to Jacob and gave him a cheap shot. He took his gun out and pointed it towards Jacob but hesitated. Ryder started crying like she never cried before. Her energy started draining out from all that has been happening. Everything felt like a dream but the pain on Ryder`s wrists told her that this was all real.

Ryder was held hostage and Rick remained anonymous as he called Pete up. He wanted $5 million dollars for the release of Ryder. Pete thought that it was a prank call and hung up the phone. The second time Rick called, he let Pete listened to the screaming voices of Ryder and a gunshot.

"Okay, whoever you are, calm down and don`t do anything to my daughter. I`ll give you what you want. Just don`t hurt my daughter please," Pete explained to Jacob who still remained anonymous.

Just as soon as Rick put down the phone, there was a loud thud on the big zinc door at the entrance. It was the police together with the SWAT team. Jacob just put up his hands and freezed but Rick tried running away. It was too late for Rick as the whole area was surrounded. Rick started shooting aimlessly towards the police but he ended up being shot on his legs. He was taken down by one of the police officers.

Ryder was quickly taken into safe hands by the police as Jacob and Rick got arrested. Ryder was still crying and couldn`t believe what just happened. Her hands were trembling and her face was pale. She was escorted into the police car and felt so weak she blacked out.

When Ryder woke up and came back to her senses, she saw Jessie`s face smacked right in front of her. She was at the school`s hallway. She could see the other students crowding around her and Jessie. "Shit! It`s a vision," she thought and panicked. She slapped Jessie`s face so hard that she fell to the floor and everyone backed off. She quickly ran out of school and called her parents. She saw Jessie chasing but managed to outrun her.

"I need BOTH of you to come back home this instant. It`s an emergency. I`ll explain to you both as soon as you get back. Hurry up!" Ryder explained to her dad as she tried keeping up with her breath. All she was extremely worried about was her grandmother`s safety.

Just as soon as Ryder reached home, she looked through the windows from outside and saw the same exact masked man pointing a gun to her grandmother. Her grandmother was begging for mercy on the floor helpless and she immediately slammed the door opened. The masked man was startled and was so shocked that he pulled the trigger towards Ryder. The bullet went through her chest and blood started pouring out. She fell on her knees and then flat on the floor. The masked man ran off and police sirens could be heard. She started having a blurry vision and was losing sight. The last thing she ever saw and heard was her grandmother approaching her and shouted her name.

Thursday, September 8, 2011

Exercise 1- Character Profile



Best Man is a story about three best friends- Adam, Nick and Mark who knew each other back when they were in college and already living their adult lives. Mark is already experiencing fatherhood and is already married to Julie who is actually Adam`s ex girlfriend. Mark and Julie already have a kid name India and are already expecting another one. Nick and Adam have their own successful business which was having their own pornographic website called PleazeYourself.com. However, when Nick decides that he wants to get married, Adam tries his best to stop him from doing so as he wants to save Nick from doing the wrong thing, especially with the wrong woman. Hence, for this exercise or rather blog entry, I`ll be talking about the character, Adam, from the story.

Adam is really petty when it comes to getting the "right" woman. He`s pretty much a perfectionist in when it comes to that particular matter. He knows what he really want in a woman. He would think that everything is going well until the woman he`s dating does something that turns him off. For example, he would start having bad thoughts about the woman he`s dating if she pronounces a word wrongly or not in a way he personally prefers it. Long keep short, he would think that the woman is not right for him if she does even the smallest thing that is not the way he prefers it and starts judging her. He likes to pick the smallest mistake and make a big deal out of it. He`s quite a woman perfectionist. Apart from that, he`s afraid of losing one of his best friends, Nick, to Sandra, whom he`s getting married to. Furthermore, he thinks that Sandra is such a jerk and doesn`t deserve someone like Nick. Hence, as Nick`s best friend, he tries his best to get Nick to realise that Sandra is the wrong woman to get married to before it`s too late. However, Mark told Adam to just let it be as he knows how Adam can be when it comes to women. Mark just wants Nick to be happy. Mark told Adam that nobody`s perfect and Nick has got the best woman he has ever got in his life and doesn`t want Adam to spoil things. But Adam being the way he is, he disagrees and still tries to break off their marriage plans.

In conclusion, Adam`s inner presence tells me that he judges things or rather people from the smallest mistakes and wants certain things to go the way he prefers it to be. Furthermore, he quickly jumps into conclusions. It is because he thought that Charlie (a girl he met along the way and started dating) was cheating on him without even confronting her when he saw her with another guy in her house who was actually her brother. Apart from all his flaws, he`s actually a really loyal and sincere man who knows what`s best for his best friend.

Adam is quite a good looking man who easily gets women to date him but ends up breaking their hearts. He`s no more than 6 feet tall even though he wants to be as he thinks that being 6 feet tall is the perfect height for a man. He`s also living quite a successful live as a business man. While working out at the gym, he met Charlie and grew some personal interest towards her. Being the good looking guy that he is, Charlie was the one who ended up asking him out. He was so good looking that Sandra once kissed him on the lips when Mark was busy talking on the phone. Sandra also claimed that it was such a waste that she met Nick first before Adam.

In conclusion, Adam`s outer presence tells me that he`s a really good looking guy who`s living a really successful life and gets woman easily.

At the end of the story, Nick found out the true colours of Sandra when he caught Sandra stripping naked in front of Adam but knew that Adam had no intentions of betraying their friendship. Adam was actually there to meet up with Nick and have a final try in talking Nick out of his wedding with Sandra. Charlie got pregnant with Adam`s child and Adam thinks that everything was too fast until Mark made him realise that he`s going to be a really good father. It is because Adam was chosen by Mark to be India`s godfather as he knew Adam was doing really well with Mark`s kid. The wedding was cancelled off and Nick knew how much he would regretted if he had really married Sandra.